05-14-2013, 06:03 AM
Hi CiderM
I really like the way you have blended these two pieces, the way you have captured and described these images allows the reader such a clear view of your early morning check on the Oaks feels now like I have also had a look. The haiku is a lot smoother after the edit so nice job all round. Very much enjoyed. TOMH
I really like the way you have blended these two pieces, the way you have captured and described these images allows the reader such a clear view of your early morning check on the Oaks feels now like I have also had a look. The haiku is a lot smoother after the edit so nice job all round. Very much enjoyed. TOMH
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