05-13-2013, 04:50 PM
the sex is evident 
it all alludes to having sex. lots of the phrasing is common, watch out for repetition (chains)
be subtle but make sure the subtlety is understood. the mountain peaks shudder isn't subtle. good sex poetry is extremely hard to do, so many have gone before. we can still create original and meaningful images though.
i stabbed her like a pin in pomegranate.
the use and many varied meanings of flower is abundant in sexual poetry. what are red satin chains, a period? virginity?
forest is another well used word as is throbbing, as soon as i see the word throbbing i think of hard penis or headache, or both.
it all alludes to having sex. lots of the phrasing is common, watch out for repetition (chains)
be subtle but make sure the subtlety is understood. the mountain peaks shudder isn't subtle. good sex poetry is extremely hard to do, so many have gone before. we can still create original and meaningful images though.
i stabbed her like a pin in pomegranate.
the use and many varied meanings of flower is abundant in sexual poetry. what are red satin chains, a period? virginity?
forest is another well used word as is throbbing, as soon as i see the word throbbing i think of hard penis or headache, or both.