(slight edit)Three Haiku

[Magpie]

slightly edited, but just a tiny bit

Springtide aromas,
Peach Blossom, freshly cut grass,
petrol lawnmower.

Unexpected breeze
raises a dusty frenzy
amid the Tulips.

Perched on the back fence,
three small Chaffinches listen
as I play guitar.

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Springtide aromas,
Peach Blossom, freshly cut grass,
petrol lawnmower.

Unexpected breeze
whips up a dusty frenzy
amid the Tulips.

Three small Chaffinches
perched on the fence, listen to
my guitar playing.