The Storm
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Thanks, I appreciate the feedback, how do you think I should tweak the meter? I tried to make it iambic pentameter, but kind of gave up by the end.
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The Storm - by Ajax - 05-12-2013, 09:31 PM
RE: The Storm - by Ajax - 05-13-2013, 01:43 AM
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