05-11-2013, 11:29 AM
I like your idea with the poem. It reads as a poem about love, and I enjoyed it, but I sensed some sexual undertones. Was that intentional, or am I just seeing things because I'm starving too much?

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...Untitled... - by Zerric - 05-09-2013, 12:21 PM
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RE: ...Untitled... - by Labyrinth - 05-11-2013, 11:17 AM
RE: ...Untitled... - by Volaticus - 05-11-2013, 11:29 AM
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