Heart Throb
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(05-11-2013, 07:17 AM)justcloudy Wrote:  I pleaded "don’t go",
we will picnic on Mulholland,
pate and chardonnay. --> shouldn't you keep the quotes until the end of the stanza? (unless that's some device I'm missing or something... )

loved the content and writing. simple, poignant and relate-able. but I don't have any clue what the Little Bastard part is all about... maybe it's some brit cultural reference? anyway thanks for sharing dear!
Cloudy, the Little Bastard is what James Dean called his Porsche 550 Spyder that he crashed and died in. I'm not British but red, white, and blue through and through. I prefer to leave the quoted words as is, but appreciate your idea on that. Thank you for reading and commenting dear.
my best,
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Heart Throb - by Heartafire - 05-10-2013, 12:29 PM
RE: Heart Throb - by Sonata - 05-11-2013, 05:56 AM
RE: Heart Throb - by justcloudy - 05-11-2013, 07:17 AM
RE: Heart Throb - by Heartafire - 05-11-2013, 07:33 AM
RE: Heart Throb - by rowens - 05-11-2013, 07:34 AM
RE: Heart Throb - by Heartafire - 05-11-2013, 07:43 AM
RE: Heart Throb - by justcloudy - 05-11-2013, 07:43 AM
RE: Heart Throb - by rowens - 05-11-2013, 07:53 AM
RE: Heart Throb - by Heartafire - 05-11-2013, 08:04 AM
RE: Heart Throb - by justcloudy - 05-11-2013, 07:55 AM
RE: Heart Throb - by rowens - 05-11-2013, 08:10 AM
RE: Heart Throb - by Heartafire - 05-11-2013, 09:08 AM
RE: Heart Throb - by rowens - 05-11-2013, 09:17 AM
RE: Heart Throb - by Heartafire - 05-11-2013, 09:48 AM
RE: Heart Throb - by rowens - 05-11-2013, 09:54 AM
RE: Heart Throb - by Heartafire - 05-11-2013, 10:11 AM



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