05-11-2013, 07:17 AM
I pleaded "don’t go",
we will picnic on Mulholland,
pate and chardonnay. --> shouldn't you keep the quotes until the end of the stanza? (unless that's some device I'm missing or something... )
loved the content and writing. simple, poignant and relate-able. but I don't have any clue what the Little Bastard part is all about... maybe it's some brit cultural reference? anyway thanks for sharing dear!
we will picnic on Mulholland,
pate and chardonnay. --> shouldn't you keep the quotes until the end of the stanza? (unless that's some device I'm missing or something... )
loved the content and writing. simple, poignant and relate-able. but I don't have any clue what the Little Bastard part is all about... maybe it's some brit cultural reference? anyway thanks for sharing dear!
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The howling beast is back.
The howling beast is back.