4 poems

[Volaticus]

Thanks once again for the kind comments Volaticus,
I am in the process of editing these and then I shall repost it and see what people think, I'm going to try and stay away from the 5-7-5 format from now on, I think that has been my downfall at times. And also the 'turquoise twilight' one is my favourite, but Billy is right in saying that is almost excellent, and that's good enough reason to try and make it excellent. Turquoise is such a beautiful word it feels like you can't fail when using it.
I myself have also admired that picture so many times, and because you live in Denmark which is almost as far north as where I am in the north of Scotland then you'll know exactly what I mean. I wrote that one last year near the summer solstice June 21st ish and at that time if its a clear night it doesn't really get properly dark and the colours int the sky are spectacular, and all its all about to start again soon.
Thanks once again.
AR

You are most welcome
I will very much look forward to reading your edits when you're finished with them. And I so much agree about the 'turquoise'. I think it's a very pleasurable word to speak out loud. The sound of it feels comfortable for my mouth.
You're right, I know exactly what you mean. These days I'm almost 'tripping' from all the changes in the nature, and the beauty of lights and shadows. It's a wonderful time of the year, and it will only increase in beauty.
When you said you were from Northern Scotland it made so much sense to me, to why your poems speak so much to my heart. It truly is beautiful up there and I really hope I get to see it for myself, someday. And that beauty is clearly seen in your writing. And as you said yourself, we almost live equally north, so many of the things you can see, I can see. And that's a lot of the things I myself am fascinated about.
My best,
LB