Feral Cat

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05-10-2013, 09:22 AM

(05-10-2013, 09:09 AM)Heartafire Wrote: Hi there, I love this. I particularly like the last line, ends on a little
soft humor. I too love alliteration and you have done a fine job with that in l1.
best,
Heart

Hi Heart,
Thank you very much, for your very kind comments. It makes me happy, that you enjoyed my poem.
Best to you too,
-LB

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Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 05-10-2013, 01:51 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Magpie - 05-10-2013, 02:05 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 05-10-2013, 02:22 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Heartafire - 05-10-2013, 09:09 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 05-10-2013, 09:22 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Magpie - 05-10-2013, 09:40 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 05-10-2013, 10:03 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by FayandFire - 06-02-2013, 10:57 PM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-03-2013, 12:36 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-03-2013, 05:21 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-03-2013, 08:09 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-04-2013, 01:36 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-04-2013, 10:45 PM

RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-05-2013, 02:49 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 07:41 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-05-2013, 08:50 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 09:27 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-05-2013, 09:43 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 09:54 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-05-2013, 11:22 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 09:38 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 09:46 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 09:53 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 10:03 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Brownlie - 06-05-2013, 10:06 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 10:18 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 10:12 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 10:09 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 10:18 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 10:22 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 10:30 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 10:34 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 11:33 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-05-2013, 11:56 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 11:59 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-05-2013, 09:10 PM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-06-2013, 12:10 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by billy - 06-06-2013, 07:34 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by Volaticus - 06-06-2013, 07:38 AM

RE: Feral Cat - by serge gurkski - 06-07-2013, 02:23 PM

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