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city park
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05-10-2013, 03:32 AM
I enjoyed this micro study and its well worth developing, I also enjoyed the shift from detail to landscape and as Todd suggest a comparison of human to ant could really work, not so keen on the lines 3 & 4 of S1 as they only says the same as the last three lines of the stanza and I prefer these but all in all you have a good concept that deserves some more time in the workshop. TOMH
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city park - by justcloudy - 05-09-2013, 09:47 PM
RE: city park - by Todd - 05-09-2013, 10:04 PM
RE: city park - by justcloudy - 05-09-2013, 10:07 PM
RE: city park - by Heartafire - 05-09-2013, 11:25 PM
RE: city park - by Ehud - 05-09-2013, 11:41 PM
RE: city park - by rowens - 05-09-2013, 11:58 PM
RE: city park - by serge gurkski - 05-10-2013, 12:09 AM
RE: city park - by Magpie - 05-10-2013, 01:49 AM
RE: city park - by Keith - 05-10-2013, 03:32 AM
RE: city park - by justcloudy - 05-10-2013, 06:40 PM
RE: city park - by serge gurkski - 05-10-2013, 07:14 PM
RE: city park - by justcloudy - 05-10-2013, 07:15 PM
RE: city park - by serge gurkski - 05-10-2013, 08:05 PM
RE: city park - by justcloudy - 05-10-2013, 08:48 PM
RE: city park - by rowens - 05-10-2013, 09:49 PM
RE: city park - by serge gurkski - 05-10-2013, 10:15 PM
RE: city park - by Dibbs - 05-11-2013, 03:10 AM
RE: city park - by justcloudy - 05-11-2013, 08:01 AM
RE: city park - by rowens - 05-11-2013, 08:17 AM
RE: city park - by serge gurkski - 05-11-2013, 10:28 AM
RE: city park - by justcloudy - 05-11-2013, 04:25 PM
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