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Blood On Her

Sam33lynn Offline

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05-08-2013, 02:37 PM

"With some pointy thing" is kinda vague, but I really like the imagery in the lines "but her body is so ruptured...until she is but ash and sift"
The last line is very powerful as well

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Blood On Her - by Obloquy - 05-08-2013, 11:46 AM

RE: Blood On Her - by Zerric - 05-08-2013, 12:08 PM

RE: Blood On Her - by Sam33lynn - 05-08-2013, 02:37 PM

RE: Blood On Her - by Heartafire - 05-08-2013, 11:11 PM

RE: Blood On Her - by Ehud - 05-09-2013, 05:39 AM

RE: Blood On Her - by Volaticus - 05-09-2013, 07:53 AM

RE: Blood On Her - by billy - 05-09-2013, 03:24 PM

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