Down the side of the Sofa
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(05-02-2013, 09:51 AM)Heartafire Wrote:  Clever and amusing piece Time. Made me smile and even chuckle aloud at times, here:
too big for the tube and all out of lube,
wedged into the gap I stayed,
quite a visual! fun stuff,
best
Heart
Thanks for your kind words, very happy you enjoyed it, I had fun writing this one. Best TOMH

(05-06-2013, 10:31 AM)Volaticus Wrote:  It's a wonderful and witty little story that unfolds in this poem.
Very colourful. Kind of like a wicked children's story, written for adults.
Loved it! Thanks for the read Smile
Ha, glad you liked it, thanks for taking the time to comment. TOMH

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Messages In This Thread
Down the side of the Sofa - by Keith - 03-21-2013, 07:40 AM
RE: Down the side of the Sofa - by newsclippings - 03-21-2013, 08:33 PM
RE: Down the side of the Sofa - by Keith - 03-22-2013, 06:05 AM
RE: Down the side of the Sofa - by milo - 03-22-2013, 06:11 AM
RE: Down the side of the Sofa - by Keith - 03-26-2013, 06:02 AM
RE: Down the side of the Sofa - by Smiffy - 03-30-2013, 08:44 PM
RE: Down the side of the Sofa - by Keith - 05-02-2013, 08:07 AM
RE: Down the side of the Sofa - by Lou - 03-26-2013, 05:38 AM
RE: Down the side of the Sofa - by Heartafire - 05-02-2013, 09:51 AM
RE: Down the side of the Sofa - by Keith - 05-08-2013, 07:56 AM
RE: Down the side of the Sofa - by Volaticus - 05-06-2013, 10:31 AM



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