05-08-2013, 07:56 AM
(05-02-2013, 09:51 AM)Heartafire Wrote: Clever and amusing piece Time. Made me smile and even chuckle aloud at times, here:Thanks for your kind words, very happy you enjoyed it, I had fun writing this one. Best TOMH
too big for the tube and all out of lube,
wedged into the gap I stayed,
quite a visual! fun stuff,
best
Heart
(05-06-2013, 10:31 AM)Volaticus Wrote: It's a wonderful and witty little story that unfolds in this poem.Ha, glad you liked it, thanks for taking the time to comment. TOMH
Very colourful. Kind of like a wicked children's story, written for adults.
Loved it! Thanks for the read
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