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05-08-2013, 07:47 AM

I must agree with NakedBear on the narrator. I wasn't able to sympathize with the narrator, because I don't know much about the person. There was not enough depth, for me to be able to engage myself in the poem.
Thanks for the read.

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Another day - by albino-rino-5000 - 05-07-2013, 12:48 PM

RE: Another day - by NakedBear - 05-07-2013, 01:57 PM

RE: Another day - by Brownlie - 05-07-2013, 02:22 PM

RE: Another day - by Volaticus - 05-08-2013, 07:47 AM

RE: Another day - by Sam33lynn - 05-08-2013, 10:00 AM

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