Little Dancers

[Volaticus]

thanks LB! I agree, that stanza was put together pretty quickly but doesn't relate much. Any thoughts on this one? thanks for all the input!!

I ponder what story it could be
that these little dancers sing to me.
Its meaning eluding indifferently,
if only I had a cipher.

Personally, I like this stanza better than the other one. It would fit in quite well after the third stanza, and it has relevance to the poem. I'm not sure 'bout the third line though. I think it's the 'eluding indifferently'. It seems vague to me. But all in all, this works better than the other stanza you posted, so well done.