Shadow o' Tarsis..

[Heartafire]

Hi Cody, let me apologize if I was rude in my comments. I want to say that my suggestions are just that and to be binned at will. I think you have tremendous potential, your vocabulary is outstanding, I did find this poem difficult but I see that you are a very capable writer. Do not take critique to heart, You should see some of the things that have been said about my "stuff".
I have grown used to it ;-).
My best,
Heart