05-06-2013, 01:19 PM
Hi Heart,
I really enjoyed this poem, and the images are very crisp, clear and significant. It manages to say a lot in such a small space.
The image of a caged dove in stanza 1 is very powerful along with keys twice, and also I like the use of the word flail, it really sounds like the action that it is describing and when following fingers, even more so. In fact the use of the F sound throughout the poem is very effective and clever, and enables you to use the word frock, which I don't think I've heard in a long time.
Even as I read it again now I am seeing more meanings to it.
Thanks.
AR
I really enjoyed this poem, and the images are very crisp, clear and significant. It manages to say a lot in such a small space.
The image of a caged dove in stanza 1 is very powerful along with keys twice, and also I like the use of the word flail, it really sounds like the action that it is describing and when following fingers, even more so. In fact the use of the F sound throughout the poem is very effective and clever, and enables you to use the word frock, which I don't think I've heard in a long time.
Even as I read it again now I am seeing more meanings to it.
Thanks.
AR
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