05-05-2013, 06:16 AM
fine stuff. I mostly agree with Heslopian ( re capitals e.g and also re "rapists").
Concerning the "kicking of children", I think the poet meant to say that the children are being kicked.
Maybe just an unfortunate phrasing?
The formatting of the text (center) distracts a bit from the message / content.
cheers
serge
Concerning the "kicking of children", I think the poet meant to say that the children are being kicked.
Maybe just an unfortunate phrasing?
The formatting of the text (center) distracts a bit from the message / content.
cheers
serge