The Moon

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Just a working title.

The dark illuminated
When I looked out my bedroom window
She visited me late that night
While I counted sheep
We shared a good book
And a cup of sweet tea
She told me old stories
Of all she could see
About righteous hearts
Carrying light
And how they guided her
To shine just as bright

Honest opinions please. Thank you.

I think this is a nice piece about the moon.

Right away the moon shows off like the sun, line 1/2.
I love that the moonlight visits you as a welcome guest. or more so, you invite yourself over, and she acts as if you're a guest that she asked to come over.
Clearly, even in times of dark, the moon can see the just, and even guide the holy. and even yet, everyone smiles when she does when they see her.
it's like it brings back good memories.