A small piece of heaven

[Magpie]

Hi,
Another nice nature poem by you, I still feel, like I said last time that the odd full stop here and there wouldn't go a miss.
The sentiments expressed are nice but at times a little too cliche,
nature is an often written about subject in poetry so it probably one of
hardest topics to cover without being cliche.
Also it is very reminiscent of one your previous poem "There is nothing more beautiful than life", with a couple of phrases being used in both poems.
Thanks for the read and hope that some of these comments will be of use.

Thanks.