A small piece of heaven

[Heartafire]

A SMALL PIECE OF HEAVEN.....


It’s a wonderful day today, I think I might drop today

The sun shines while the earth gallantly basks in its glory, gallantly too
The birds are chirping as if, why the comma
Expecting something special to happen, drop expecting ,somthing special is about to happen

The rivers flow smoothly with the gleaming light of the heavens,

The sky is blue and clear as a marble, drop some of the "the's"

The clouds moving about their own pace, (move at
Create these mirages that only the gods can decipher,

The bountiful glaciers that flow over these,

Snow clad mountains are a testament to the desires,

That we all aspire to achieve some day,

The sun has risen from its heavy slumber,

Spreading it’s aura through time immemorial,

The spruce trees shed their leaves as if,

In wait for a new beginning.

This is a lovely tribute to nature's beauty. I have left some input, hope it is helpful. Thank you for the lovely poem.
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