Poem LVIII

[YaMarVa]

I really like this poem! It gets the message across well. I like the religious tone.

Why did you choose to use future tense instead of present? I'm just curious.

The way you broke up the lines is interesting. Like

Of yesterday's wisdom

No more.

It misleads you at first which I like, but I'm also very new at poetry.

Thanks for the review.

I wrote it in the current tense, or future tense, because Solomon's message (of a wise ruler in control of nature) is still being taught and practiced.