05-01-2013, 08:40 AM
I really like this poem! It gets the message across well. I like the religious tone.
Why did you choose to use future tense instead of present? I'm just curious.
The way you broke up the lines is interesting. Like
Of yesterday's wisdom
No more.
It misleads you at first which I like, but I'm also very new at poetry.
Why did you choose to use future tense instead of present? I'm just curious.
The way you broke up the lines is interesting. Like
Of yesterday's wisdom
No more.
It misleads you at first which I like, but I'm also very new at poetry.