The End
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Hi glittercake
I'm in Rowens camp on this one, this is a well covered topic and I like your bouncy take, that is light and an easy read, and if that is what your aiming for you succeeded, if you want to push yourself from mild to serious then as Rowen suggest you need to dig deeper, show us how we end, lets us feel it and taste it. best TOMH

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The End - by Glittercake - 04-27-2013, 10:56 AM
RE: The End - by rowens - 04-29-2013, 01:18 AM
RE: The End - by Volaticus - 04-29-2013, 07:27 AM
RE: The End - by Keith - 05-01-2013, 07:48 AM
RE: The End - by BrotherKaramazov - 05-01-2013, 10:28 AM



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