Rebekka
#12
Personally I usually feel that writing a circumcision into a poem is usually not a good idea, unless you want to strip bare all the penises.. err.. metaphors.

Just a personal preference. I'd rather look at breast then watch a circumcision and
most readers now days would rather just look at the breasts, they don't wanna know if the milk is sour.
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Rebekka - by milo - 04-30-2013, 06:27 AM
RE: Rebekka - by tectak - 04-30-2013, 07:12 AM
RE: Rebekka - by trueenigma - 04-30-2013, 10:19 AM
RE: Rebekka - by milo - 04-30-2013, 11:02 AM
RE: Rebekka - by billy - 04-30-2013, 12:25 PM
RE: Rebekka - by milo - 04-30-2013, 03:51 PM
RE: Rebekka - by billy - 04-30-2013, 04:23 PM
RE: Rebekka - by milo - 04-30-2013, 04:25 PM
RE: Rebekka - by billy - 04-30-2013, 04:45 PM
RE: Rebekka - by milo - 04-30-2013, 05:01 PM
RE: Rebekka - by heslopian - 04-30-2013, 08:24 PM
RE: Rebekka - by milo - 05-01-2013, 09:28 AM
RE: Rebekka - by trueenigma - 05-01-2013, 09:35 AM
RE: Rebekka - by trueenigma - 05-01-2013, 07:13 AM
RE: Rebekka - by Brownlie - 06-20-2013, 07:11 AM
RE: Rebekka - by milo - 06-20-2013, 07:26 AM
RE: Rebekka - by Brownlie - 06-20-2013, 07:45 AM
RE: Rebekka - by milo - 06-20-2013, 07:48 AM
RE: Rebekka - by Brownlie - 06-20-2013, 08:19 AM
RE: Rebekka - by milo - 06-20-2013, 08:35 AM
RE: Rebekka - by Brownlie - 06-20-2013, 08:47 AM
RE: Rebekka - by Leanne - 06-22-2013, 08:02 AM
RE: Rebekka - by Bunx - 06-29-2013, 01:23 AM
RE: Rebekka - by ChristopherSea - 08-12-2013, 11:44 PM
RE: Rebekka - by milo - 08-13-2013, 02:41 AM



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