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Volaticus Offline

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04-29-2013, 07:27 AM

Hi,
There's a kind of light feel to the poem, that I don't think matches the theme.
I like the thoughts in this, but I would like to see some imagery to expand those thoughts.
Thanks for the read Smile

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The End - by Glittercake - 04-27-2013, 10:56 AM

RE: The End - by rowens - 04-29-2013, 01:18 AM

RE: The End - by Volaticus - 04-29-2013, 07:27 AM

RE: The End - by Keith - 05-01-2013, 07:48 AM

RE: The End - by BrotherKaramazov - 05-01-2013, 10:28 AM

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