04-29-2013, 01:47 AM
It's a very bumpy meter. And the rhymes don't add much. All that gets in the way of whatever story you want to tell.
Seems a lot of people are stuck in the Raven's shadow. But you have to find the substance that forms that shadow, then get past it. Poe was more than a "jingle-man", but this poem doesn't get that far.
Seems a lot of people are stuck in the Raven's shadow. But you have to find the substance that forms that shadow, then get past it. Poe was more than a "jingle-man", but this poem doesn't get that far.