CityFolk

[AlexSharp]

I think the first two stanzas start off very strong, with describing the street, however by the end the rush of energy conveyed in the begging is gone.

The last two are observations of the way people interact and how that drives the condition of the modern metropolis. The 'inertia' derives from the surrounding activity, I wasn't really trying to evoke any sort of rush of energy.

Thanks for the feedback, it's much appreciated.