CityFolk

[AlexSharp]

An empty inertia,
Signals buzz liked winged snakes,

Did you have buzz liked on purpose?

Haste conquers all,
a system of chaotic perfection.

Roars in the distance,
Bellow from great machines,
Below from steel stalagmites,
Observe as a fox.

And this part, on purpose?

The threat of lethargy,
The elimination of contingencies,
Masked and deceitful,
Spin the wheels of metropolis.

The contemporary struggle,
A fragile ladder dissolving from the bottom,
Closed eyes are never closed,
A shaken hand hides the other.

It sounds like jagged edge fragments running against each other. Did you want it to feel that way, since it's a city?

No I fixed the "liked" thanks.
Also yeah, I wanted it to have a busy, overwhelming feeling within the fragments. There's just so much going on everywhere. I also wanted to leave it sort of of vague and subjective as interaction with a city tends to be.
Thanks for the feedback.