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A Theory

Ajax

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04-28-2013, 01:47 AM

(04-27-2013, 11:31 PM)Volaticus Wrote: I think it's a nice poem I'm not sure if it needs all the commas.
"At came to me, as a raven".. That line confused me. Should "At" be "It"?

Yeah, it should. Embarrassing that i didn't realize that earlier. Thanks for the comment!

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A Theory - by Ajax - 04-24-2013, 10:09 AM

RE: A Theory - by YaMarVa - 04-27-2013, 12:55 AM

RE: A Theory - by Magpie - 04-27-2013, 07:54 AM

RE: A Theory - by Ajax - 04-27-2013, 09:05 AM

RE: A Theory - by Volaticus - 04-27-2013, 11:31 PM

RE: A Theory - by Ajax - 04-28-2013, 01:47 AM

RE: A Theory - by rowens - 04-29-2013, 01:47 AM

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