04-27-2013, 10:36 AM
Something I whipped up quick to get a feel for the critique process of the forum. Let me know what you think, thanks.
CityFolk
An empty inertia,
Signals buzz like winged snakes,
Haste conquers all,
a system of chaotic perfection.
Roars in the distance,
Bellow from great machines,
Below from steel stalagmites,
Observe as a fox.
The threat of lethargy,
The elimination of contingencies,
Masked and deceitful,
Spin the wheels of metropolis.
The contemporary struggle,
A fragile ladder dissolving from the bottom,
Closed eyes are never closed,
A shaken hand hides the other.
CityFolk
An empty inertia,
Signals buzz like winged snakes,
Haste conquers all,
a system of chaotic perfection.
Roars in the distance,
Bellow from great machines,
Below from steel stalagmites,
Observe as a fox.
The threat of lethargy,
The elimination of contingencies,
Masked and deceitful,
Spin the wheels of metropolis.
The contemporary struggle,
A fragile ladder dissolving from the bottom,
Closed eyes are never closed,
A shaken hand hides the other.
"Poor old Dali loped with an amazin' raging cyst, as poor Roald Dahl eloped with Anna-May's enraging sisters."- Steven F Smith
@Alex_Robertson6
http://tosurvivemetropolis.tumblr.com
@Alex_Robertson6
http://tosurvivemetropolis.tumblr.com