Tiny Homeless Sestina

[PoetryAndPhysics]

Gracias tectak. This is nothing, wait till I get out a couple of pantoums, one or two villanelles. Well, first I’d have to write them... Perhaps S2L2 would be clearer with “full of once ripe apples” (but that makes it more trite)? By long cored apples I was trying to say long since cored, apples that she ate long ago but kept the cores of. I tried comparing her memory of what the apples were (fresh) to newborns…doing that in one line wasn’t so easy. I’ll plead the 5th on S3L2; I liked “marvelous” in that position, and “dependable old sweatshirt”, and it was better than what was there before, so went for it. Kk, that’s enough explaining out of me

Thanks,
Gary