04-26-2013, 06:23 AM
(04-19-2013, 06:30 AM)Smiffy Wrote: Enjoyed the read, the opening lines drew me in from the off. I think you could maybe give a hint as to the present age of the writer by stating an age, when I'm 65 or something though that spoil the reverse at the end.Oh my, I hoped no one would notice! Tsk, I should know better
Being picky here but you would'nt hear the Archers on radio three, it's on radio four, artistic licence.
Thankyou everyone for the advice and comments. I enjoyed writing a happy poem for once.
- Amy
(You wouldn't be surprised to know my parents did not christen me UnicornRainbowCake.)
(You wouldn't be surprised to know my parents did not christen me UnicornRainbowCake.)