04-24-2013, 10:36 PM
I think this poem as it is would come alive if other poems with these sounds were associated with it.
But in certain moods, this poem alone would work for me.
You said "concept", and though that doesn't mean conceptual work, those are ideas that people judge things with too, I guess. But there's more to this here. More than conceptual art. So you're on your way to something, or maybe there already.
But in certain moods, this poem alone would work for me.
You said "concept", and though that doesn't mean conceptual work, those are ideas that people judge things with too, I guess. But there's more to this here. More than conceptual art. So you're on your way to something, or maybe there already.