The Cemetery Plot
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Nice title and poem. It might be easier to read, if you added some full stops, and edit out some of the words, as it gets a bit wordy. E.g. line 6: I like what it means, but it's quite a mouthful, and hard to read out loud.
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The Cemetery Plot - by xast - 04-19-2013, 07:58 AM
RE: The Cemetery Plot - by allykat727 - 04-23-2013, 09:31 AM
RE: The Cemetery Plot - by Volaticus - 04-24-2013, 05:44 AM
RE: The Cemetery Plot - by Ajax - 04-24-2013, 09:40 AM



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