The Reunion

[Magpie]

This poem at times has some very good imagery, such as "The crater you left" which conveys the whole tone of what you are trying to say perfectly. I would also mention the repetition of words, such as "longer" in the first stanza and "it" in the third stanza. I don't know if you read your poems back to yourself out loud, but I think sometimes it's very beneficial to do so, and you will be able to hear certain mistakes easier than it would be to see them.
But again I stress excellent imagery, keep it up mate.