04-22-2013, 05:22 PM
Hello, I'm new here.
I like the image of the lighthouse and how you have conjured it up. It seems to me half of a poem, though. I tend to keep strong images in my head for a bit until I find a metaphorical direction for a complete poem. The interest of many affecting poems comes from the interplay between one idea and another. Perhaps a relationship you had, perhaps an age-old idea...
Thanks
Michael
I like the image of the lighthouse and how you have conjured it up. It seems to me half of a poem, though. I tend to keep strong images in my head for a bit until I find a metaphorical direction for a complete poem. The interest of many affecting poems comes from the interplay between one idea and another. Perhaps a relationship you had, perhaps an age-old idea...
Thanks
Michael