04-22-2013, 10:28 AM
i think that's better but what sort of a writer was he? maybe use a word to show what kind of head was being ripped off.
could farewell be used some way. he was an adventurer so maybe adventurous.
if the lion had ripped his head off and made his bells toll. (i know that's not a working line but i got a laugh from it
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could farewell be used some way. he was an adventurer so maybe adventurous.
if the lion had ripped his head off and made his bells toll. (i know that's not a working line but i got a laugh from it
)