04-21-2013, 02:04 PM
A sweet poem. It reads like the lyrics to an obscure blues or rock song, and has that nice touch of modern urban angst about it which can make for great poetry. "Gravy", I assume, is a metaphor for money? (I sound like such a middle-class cracker...) Thanks for the read
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe

