Falling Apart

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I don't really know much about poetry, so my critisism won't be as constructive as others. But anyway, the last stanza was my favourite, I don't really know, it just felt really relatable, and it flowed from line to line very well. Maybe just try re-reading through your poetry before you post it a few times. I read mine out loud to make sure it all flows and makes sense.