04-18-2013, 07:58 PM
Okay, I'll play with it a bit more... how's the latest version?
I was attempting to rewrite it in iambic pentameter. I think I may have shoe horned it a bit too much and it's ended up a bit too "meh, so what"
I was attempting to rewrite it in iambic pentameter. I think I may have shoe horned it a bit too much and it's ended up a bit too "meh, so what"
this is just awful. It is blushingly faux-poetic - Milo

