Tranquility Transcends

Tranquility Transcends

KirstieMillar
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04-18-2013, 03:58 AM

I really enjoyed your poem! I found it had a tranquil, calming affect and it touched me. However, I agree with the other posts about the break, I found it to be rather jarring, it takes away from a poem that will otherwise moved rather seamlessly. Very good!

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Tranquility Transcends - by philoinlove - 04-14-2013, 06:30 PM

RE: Tranquility Trancends - by Heartafire - 04-14-2013, 10:42 PM

RE: Tranquility Trancends - by Volaticus - 04-15-2013, 12:20 AM

RE: Tranquility Trancends - by heslopian - 04-15-2013, 03:15 AM

RE: Tranquility Transcends - by Leanne - 04-15-2013, 03:28 AM

RE: Tranquility Transcends - by philoinlove - 04-17-2013, 03:55 PM

RE: Tranquility Transcends - by KirstieMillar - 04-18-2013, 03:58 AM

RE: Tranquility Transcends - by philoinlove - 04-18-2013, 07:14 AM

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