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Semicolon. It was the best of times; it was the worst of times.

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04-17-2013, 07:25 PM

(04-17-2013, 07:16 PM)milo Wrote:
(04-17-2013, 07:10 PM)rayheinrich Wrote:
(04-17-2013, 07:08 PM)milo Wrote: that is #2
Nope: #4

it would be if there was no "internal punctuation".
(that's the comma btw)

If you don't like my #4, you could always change your #1 from:
"1. to join 2 independent connected clauses without a conjunction."
to:
"1. to join 2 independent connected clauses with or without a conjunction."
which would then include the conjunction "as a matter of fact"
and obviate the need for #4.

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Semicolon. It was the best of times; it was the worst of times. - by tectak - 04-17-2013, 06:24 PM

RE: Semicolon. It was the best of times; it was the worst of times. - by milo - 04-17-2013, 06:40 PM

RE: Semicolon. It was the best of times; it was the worst of times. - by tectak - 04-17-2013, 06:49 PM

RE: Semicolon. It was the best of times; it was the worst of times. - by milo - 04-17-2013, 06:54 PM

RE: Semicolon. It was the best of times; it was the worst of times. - by rayheinrich - 04-17-2013, 06:42 PM

RE: Semicolon. It was the best of times; it was the worst of times. - by rayheinrich - 04-17-2013, 07:07 PM

RE: Semicolon. It was the best of times; it was the worst of times. - by milo - 04-17-2013, 07:08 PM

RE: Semicolon. It was the best of times; it was the worst of times. - by rayheinrich - 04-17-2013, 07:10 PM

RE: Semicolon. It was the best of times; it was the worst of times. - by milo - 04-17-2013, 07:16 PM

RE: Semicolon. It was the best of times; it was the worst of times. - by rayheinrich - 04-17-2013, 07:25 PM

RE: Semicolon. It was the best of times; it was the worst of times. - by milo - 04-17-2013, 07:26 PM

RE: Semicolon. It was the best of times; it was the worst of times. - by rayheinrich - 04-17-2013, 07:40 PM

RE: Semicolon. It was the best of times; it was the worst of times. - by milo - 04-17-2013, 07:41 PM

RE: Semicolon. It was the best of times; it was the worst of times. - by tectak - 04-17-2013, 09:00 PM

RE: Semicolon. It was the best of times; it was the worst of times. - by Leanne - 04-18-2013, 04:29 AM

RE: Semicolon. It was the best of times; it was the worst of times. - by tectak - 04-18-2013, 06:47 AM

RE: Semicolon. It was the best of times; it was the worst of times. - by Leanne - 04-18-2013, 04:49 PM

RE: Semicolon. It was the best of times; it was the worst of times. - by billy - 04-19-2013, 07:50 AM

RE: Semicolon. It was the best of times; it was the worst of times. - by shemthepenman - 04-19-2013, 08:43 AM

RE: Semicolon. It was the best of times; it was the worst of times. - by billy - 04-19-2013, 09:37 AM

RE: Semicolon. It was the best of times; it was the worst of times. - by abu nuwas - 04-28-2013, 10:07 AM

RE: Semicolon. It was the best of times; it was the worst of times. - by milo - 04-28-2013, 10:10 AM

RE: Semicolon. It was the best of times; it was the worst of times. - by serge gurkski - 04-30-2013, 11:20 PM

RE: Semicolon. It was the best of times; it was the worst of times. - by Strottenburg - 05-13-2013, 07:07 AM

RE: Semicolon. It was the best of times; it was the worst of times. - by billy - 05-13-2013, 12:18 PM

RE: Semicolon. It was the best of times; it was the worst of times. - by Todd - 05-13-2013, 12:48 PM

RE: Semicolon. It was the best of times; it was the worst of times. - by ellajam - 05-04-2014, 09:28 PM

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