Long Gone

Long Gone

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04-17-2013, 10:28 AM

Hi Cloudy,
Thanks a lot for commenting Smile

I realized, that I made a big mistake with this poem. I first wrote it in Danish, then translated it into English, so I should just have left out the rhymes from the start. I think I'll make it free verse instead, and play around with the idea from scratch. And hope I come up with something considerably better Smile

Thanks for the help Smile

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Long Gone - by Volaticus - 04-16-2013, 06:57 AM

RE: Long Gone - by UnicornRainbowCake - 04-16-2013, 07:02 AM

RE: Long Gone - by Volaticus - 04-16-2013, 07:26 AM

RE: Long Gone - by milo - 04-16-2013, 07:47 AM

RE: Long Gone - by Volaticus - 04-16-2013, 08:00 AM

RE: Long Gone - by justcloudy - 04-17-2013, 10:15 AM

RE: Long Gone - by Volaticus - 04-17-2013, 10:28 AM

RE: Long Gone - by Glittercake - 04-18-2013, 06:39 AM

RE: Long Gone - by Volaticus - 04-18-2013, 06:47 AM

RE: Long Gone - by curt551 - 04-19-2013, 11:39 AM

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