04-16-2013, 09:41 AM
There's so much I like about this poem.
S1 L3: Reflections of what? That confused me.
S2 L3-4: I love this image. Beautiful.
S3 L1-2: And this image too. But I think "minds" should "mind's". And the same in S4 L3 with 'tears'. But maybe I'm just reading it wrong, I'm not sure.
I very much enjoyed reading, and I think it has some strong images. Thanks for sharing
S1 L3: Reflections of what? That confused me.
S2 L3-4: I love this image. Beautiful.
S3 L1-2: And this image too. But I think "minds" should "mind's". And the same in S4 L3 with 'tears'. But maybe I'm just reading it wrong, I'm not sure.
I very much enjoyed reading, and I think it has some strong images. Thanks for sharing