NaPM April 12 2013
#5
...I guess I'm not the only one that had a problem with this assignment? ;p

anyway this was a little experiment, sticking to meter but bypassing any rhymes. I think it's safe to say the experiment failed-- I'm far from pleased with this. but whatever, in the spirit of NaPM:


A.E.

She teased the clouds with bravery,
we craned our necks to see her soar.

We waved au revoir, à bientôt!
and cloudy skies eclipsed her craft.

Our own Meely flew high above
around the world, she said, I'll go,

with copilot and fragile plane
with all the latest tech aboard.

But voice clicked off, her signal lost...
we searched the sea on the sun line,

poor Meely's trace eluded us;
her heart stays in the blowing air.
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The howling beast is back.
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NaPM April 12 2013 - by milo - 04-13-2013, 09:35 AM
RE: NaPM April 12 - by Todd - 04-13-2013, 12:20 PM
RE: NaPM April 12 - by NakedBear - 04-13-2013, 02:28 PM
RE: NaPM April 12 - by cidermaid - 04-13-2013, 05:04 PM
RE: NaPM April 12 - by justcloudy - 04-16-2013, 02:49 AM
RE: NaPM April 12 - by brandontoh - 04-16-2013, 11:39 AM



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