04-15-2013, 02:54 AM
Thanks for the replies. I think I'll switch out the lines "bruised and disfigured, the result of my shame" with "reflect on my own feelings, now wild, once tame"
The reason I didn't capitalize God is because this poem is from an agnostic point of view. So even though this is someone who doesn't believe in God his desperation leads him to call out for one.
I wrote this during a dark night of the soul. Just sort of thrown together, so thank you all for your criticisms. Poetry is something I've become newly acquainted with but can't get enough.
The reason I didn't capitalize God is because this poem is from an agnostic point of view. So even though this is someone who doesn't believe in God his desperation leads him to call out for one.
I wrote this during a dark night of the soul. Just sort of thrown together, so thank you all for your criticisms. Poetry is something I've become newly acquainted with but can't get enough.