04-15-2013, 12:32 AM
Hi,
I absolutely adore your depicting of nature. Especially
"The reflection of nature,
a fragment of beauty." and
"Pooling drops of rain
in folded leaves,"
So subtle, and vibrant.
Only thing was, that I'm struggling a bit to comprehend what you want to convey. But maybe that's just me
A very lovely poem indeed, thanks for the read
I absolutely adore your depicting of nature. Especially
"The reflection of nature,
a fragment of beauty." and
"Pooling drops of rain
in folded leaves,"
So subtle, and vibrant.
Only thing was, that I'm struggling a bit to comprehend what you want to convey. But maybe that's just me
A very lovely poem indeed, thanks for the read