Tranquility Transcends

[Heartafire]

The sun resonates in my spirit and I
Smile. Warmth and repose engulf me
And I am certain nature is mine.

Tranquility transcends as the sun melts
For the day and the worn sea yawns.

Oh salty wet heavens how sweetly you
Fill my dry lungs? As I watch your
sweet seascape I am eternally yours.

I love the uplifting nature of this poem. I'm not sure the break is quite right on the first line. There seems to be an abundance of "and", perhaps they are necessary but in s1l3, could it be dropped with no harm done.? Fine writing!
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