04-14-2013, 09:51 AM
Hello Heart, strong images here, good choice using a dock as the setting,
as they seem to ooze intrigue and mystery! I'm guessing that it's a hot humid night,
and your emotions are as choked as to the seahorses more physical plight?
The last stanza stanza is a pearl!
Don't give up on this one, it had me looking for more even with the strong ending.
Thanks for sharing a most enjoyable read, cheers.
as they seem to ooze intrigue and mystery! I'm guessing that it's a hot humid night,
and your emotions are as choked as to the seahorses more physical plight?
The last stanza stanza is a pearl!
Don't give up on this one, it had me looking for more even with the strong ending.
Thanks for sharing a most enjoyable read, cheers.
Oh what a wicket web we weave!

