the sweetness of dark
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Hello Heart, strong images here, good choice using a dock as the setting,
as they seem to ooze intrigue and mystery! I'm guessing that it's a hot humid night,
and your emotions are as choked as to the seahorses more physical plight?
The last stanza stanza is a pearl!
Don't give up on this one, it had me looking for more even with the strong ending.
Thanks for sharing a most enjoyable read, cheers. Smile
Oh what a wicket web we weave!
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the sweetness of dark - by Heartafire - 04-12-2013, 12:34 AM
RE: the sweetness of dark - by UnicornRainbowCake - 04-12-2013, 07:47 AM
RE: the sweetness of dark - by Heartafire - 04-12-2013, 12:55 PM
RE: the sweetness of dark - by ESmith - 04-13-2013, 04:19 PM
RE: the sweetness of dark - by Heartafire - 04-14-2013, 07:21 AM
RE: the sweetness of dark - by heslopian - 04-14-2013, 09:32 AM
RE: the sweetness of dark - by Heartafire - 04-14-2013, 10:30 PM
RE: the sweetness of dark - by popeye - 04-14-2013, 09:51 AM



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