Just Another Day (first edit)

[Volaticus]

I think it's a really lovely poem, and I love the atmosphere of the rainy day, the bus, the busy people...

2 things though:

1. I'd say I got on the bus today, instead of I went. I went technically works, but it's not really the said thing and it detracts from the beauty of your poem.
2. 'As in me' communicates your point but I don't think it's correct, so to speak. I'm not an expert on this, but I don't know if you can actually say as in me. Forgive me if I'm wrong, but it sounds a bit awkward to me. I'm afraid I can't offer a better alternative either.

Only 2 little things though, and I find it very fitting I'm reading this while it's pouring down outside.

Hi Amy,
Once again, thanks a lot for the helpful comments
1. I got myself confused and wasn't sure whether 'went on' or 'got on' was the common word for it. Thanks for pointing it out, I will correct it in my next edit
2. That was the other thing, I got really confused over. 'As in me' sounds a bit weird to me, but like you, I just couldn't find out what would be a more fitting alternative :S